My Son, my Beloved Son,
today I brought you forth.
My heart is full of love for you,
as a Father loves a Son.
My Beloved one ...
My First born Son ...
Your shed blood run,
your life you gave.
Mankinds life you've saved.
How can one live,
one without the other?
You're my son I'm your mother.
Memories are far from few,
remember me, remember you.
My heart breaks, I sigh a sigh,
Tears fall I cry and cry.
Never knew love could
cause such pain.
Is it possible to be
happy again?
The One seated upon the throne,
spoke out loud and true.
He knows the feelings,
for a Firstborn Son to die,
He knows the feelings
to hurt and cry.
So do not despair Kelle Marie,
God knows the feeling felt by thee.
I am a Father I have a Son,
for yours his shed red blood run.
He gave his life a sacrifice,
for your beloved one.
Matthew's in a place,
where no one weeps.
He feels no pain he does but sleep.
Matthews in the safest place he ever could be.
He's in Jehovah's loving memory.
Remember when you lay down to sleep,
it's normal for you to cry and weep.
And as we look to days ahead,
Ressurection of loved ones from the dead.
No more sickness, death or pain,
mankind at peace with God again.
And as you stand there heart beating faster,
gone is death and all disaster.
And as you hear his loving voice,
your whole being does rejoice.
At last reunited two as one,
loving mother and your son.
For He is making all things new,
Write these words faithfull and true,
Reunited two as one,
Loving Mother And Your Son"
Taken from Revelation 21: 4-5.
And God shall wipe away all tears from their eyes; and
there shall be no more death, neither sorrow or crying,
neither shall there be anymore pain: for the former
things are passed away.
And he that sat upon the throne said, "Behold, I make
all things new. And he said unto me, Write, for these
words are faithful and true.
A contest entry
- I've Been A Mess Falling Into Severe Depression Help If You Can by stavykm.
1050 points, ended June 23, 18 entries
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Comments
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came through and reread this. I am simply stunned at the beautiful gift of words and faith you have bestowed upon Kelle to comfort her in her grieving. Again, wonderful job.
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Nice to try and cheer so up - but as poetry - no. Conent -- a tad on the didactic side? Can you really know all this stuff, when you cannot be totally certain that the Moon is not made of green cheese? You have only hear people talk about it, seen pictures allegedly of it -- but you do not know, with absolute certainty. And that's just the Moon...
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Thank you abu nuwas for taking the time to read and leave a comment.
Please don't take this the wrong way ... but in my opinion this is what I do really believe.
I have no problem with discussing this with you in the Cafe Forum ... I am involved in two threads about God in the cafe ...
Man has walked on the moon has he not?
In my opinion a persons beliefs are true to the individual person whether anyone else believes them or not don't you think?
I do not mind you being negative about my poetry at all ... so there is no need to be sorry.
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This almost made me cry. IT's filled with so much promise and so much comfort.
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging comment Tqop.
I am so happy that you found the words full of comfort and promise.
Our Beloved God promises us that these words will come true at his appointed time ...
Death will be brought to nothing and our loved ones will live the real life as God intended it to be for us ... In the beginnining ...
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This is an awesome poem. There are so many people I would love to see resurrected. I would love to see both my grandmother's again. I miss my Uncle James. I really enjoyed the read!!
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Do you know ZacEfronRocks I was speaking to a sister and guess what she told me?
She told me that her husband had died and that she was working on making a photograph album of their grandchildren to show her husband what he had missed in their grand children growing up so he could see it after the ressurection ... I thought that was a good idea don't you think it is?
So you could start an album to show both your grandmothers and your Uncle James. It is goingto be fantastic when the ressurection happens isn't it? All those happy faces we will see ... there's sure gonna be some smiling and hugging going on I know you share the same beliefs as me ...
Thank you for your kind comment on my poem it was nice of you to call by ... how blessed we are to have the hope our great God Jehovah gives us.
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I think it is a real good idea about the picture album. Never thought of that one before. Neither of my Grandmothers got to know my niece Alayna. She turned 6 yesterday. They would love to see her pictures.
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Beautiful
Wow this is just beautiful. My heart felt warm with comforting words of wisdom that you brought forth in this wonderful poem. Thank you my dear friend for you long standing, everlasting words of loving encouragement. No more pain and no more sorrow. Oh how wonderful that will be. You blessed my heart today and I want to thank you for your true understanding losing your own loved ones. You are a beautiful soul and I so do adore you my friend.
Wishing You Many Blessings,
Much Love Always,
Kelle Marie 
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For Dearest Kelle Marie ...
2 Corinthians Chapter 1: 3-4. [King James Version]
3 Grace be to you and peace from God our Father, and from the Lord Jesus Christ, the the Father of mercies, and the God of all comfort;
4 Who comforteth us in all our tribulation, that we may be able to comfort them which are in any trouble, by the comfort wherewith, we ourselves are comforted of God.
Phillipians 4:6-7. [New International Version]
4 Do not be anxious about anything, but in everything, by prayer and petition, with thanksgiving, present your request to God.
5 And the peace of God, which transcends all understanding, will gaurd your hearts and your minds in Christ Jesus.
Our Loving heavenly Father promises that through prayer he himself will help us to endure in our mind and hearts. He will help us through this by helping us to draw comfort from his promises of the ressurection where we will be re-united with our loved ones we have lost through death, then we will know the meaning of true happiness once more.
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What a beautiful job you have done on this!
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Thank you for your kind comment all faded blue.
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