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Lost and Alone

I don't even know who I am anymore
Everyday is just the same.
Everyone seems to be changing, but me.
Am I the one to blame?

I feel like I'm falling in an endless hole,
with no one there to catch me.
I'm taken away by these crashing waves,
lost in the open sea.

God, I know you haven't given up on me
But, I just feel so lost and alone.
I try and try to wait on you, Lord.
I just can't do this on my own.

Here I am, bound in chains
patiently waiting on you.
Please mend this broken heart I have,
this heart only you can renew.

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  • this is awsome! u did a great job. i can understand what ur saying in the poem.


  • Vickie Rosa
    June 15
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    very nice

    great job, very expressive. elligently done.