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Sticks and Stones

Stick and stones
may break my bones
but your words stay
with me forever.
I've got your words
Running through
my mind
the things you
said to me a
thousand times
and yet i still cry because i cant put a bandaide over you c
because i cant put
a bandaide over you
calling me a
NIGGA
i cant hold back my
EMOTIONS
at the thought of you
making inoutcast of me
you got me pin down with
hate
and its more then any other
physical bond you can put me in
instead of spitting  the words at me
that have mymind aching for pain killers id rather you have
hit me over the head with a
BRICK
or maybe even
TWIST
my arm because
then i can heal
my broken wounds
and pray that you dont
HURT
me again because
sticks and stones
may break my bones
but your words stay
with me
FOREVER.

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  • very neat poem, filled with lots of emotions.


  • Emo Boytoy
    June 15
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    I like it. Good skills


  • jessie11711
    June 15
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    way cool poem soo mutch emotion init

  • This is sad, This is full of pain.. If this is a true write, someone obviously hurt u deeply, and that feeling is harsh and sux....Keep your head up always...Smile, please, cuz someone will fall in love with it..
    This is a good write, strongly written.. alot of emotion..


  • CookieZeal Greeters member
    June 15

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    Welcome to All Poetry

    . This cut deeply for you and I feel it as well. I'm so sorry. I'm so glad you have a place to hang your hat and express things. I can't tell you how many exprerience this same thing.)

    Might I suggest something? There is a NEW category for those who want to vent and bookmark what is in their personal life. It is called "Journal". When you click "ADD" header link above you as if to add a poem, look to the RIGHT and you will see "Journal" included in a few items.

    You have the option of placing it in private or for anyone to see.

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