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scalpel.






chip away bits of me;

rip me
like confetti into thin air
and after hours
keep cold,
no matter how many hearts
you have touched.

carry me into a pit
of dreamless sleep
and outlaw the rainbow
and ban light
from the end of tunnels
because it might be a
religious reference.

cut me up into star shapes
just the right degree
because i’m imperfect and
need to be fixed,
soak me in the aroma of blood
till i faint under you

but you keep at it, with me
lime-faced, at your mercy,

to make sure i can
be stitched back
and make it out
alive.









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June 15, 2009

another one about mah darling

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  • stasis
    June 15

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    This is so sweet... and makes me think about my darling as well.
    This entire poem is so endearing and beautiful; I may need to write something semi-inspired by this
    But really, it's brilliant.
    You never cease to amaze me.

    ♣ Tegan

    • piggyback
      July 9
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      aww I didn't see this comment for some reason Thank you, it means a lot to me!