My eyes observe her knelt before my bed,
a lustful girl prepared for passion's pain,
a gentle kiss disguised the power, unsaid,
it came so fast, my darkness took its reign.
Embracing submission without complaint,
as my hand brushed hair exposing her neck,
delicate kisses numb her skin's restraint,
torment and teasing flesh her senses wreck.
The gentle throb in time to her heart beat,
her skin so pale, so soft, and flawless white,
I cradle her head, enjoying her sweet heat,
and lips open as teeth take a first bite.
The warmth of her blood slowly fills my mouth,
so addictive my pleasure, so rich and warm,
delirious her voice begs to move south,
as lips and teeth reveal her passion's storm.
When reading pleasure I cease from my feed,
a kiss, a turn to gaze at beauty's face,
she raises her eyes as her lips meet my need,
unto my spell, a vampyric embrace.
Her neck still bleeds as we kiss in moonlight,
I bite her tongue as she licks at my teeth,
I drink her kiss, sustaining us tonight,
my hands revealing her moist heat beneath.
A rip of satin bares her flesh to me,
exposed vulnerability at hand,
delight in softest flesh, I set her free,
my tongue's hunger savours her promised land.
Beneath me her body shudders pleasure,
her blood sustains my power over light,
and tender kisses submission's measure,
this vampire makes her my lover tonight.
A contest entry
- Macabre Domination by Scripts.
1300 points, ended June 28, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This was excellent I can see why you won gold I love vampires when it is good like this is. This ran so smoothly. Thank you for sharing and it was a pleasure to read. Thanks again.
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Very nicely done. Even i might submit to this vampire,maybe.
i love the second last line
"and tender kisses submission's measure" - very nice.
Thank you for entering.
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You submit??
Thank you for holding this contest and the trophy I'll PIF next week.
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Excellent job! Great flow, enjoyable to read. I love how it ends.
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Thank you SoF.
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wow is right!
i was thinking about trying this, but ive never done Macabre Domination, and this entry is quite amazing! wonderful write!!!
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Thank you liltulip
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WOW! Now how am I supposed to compete with this..Sis?
Very well done! I wish you the best in the contest.
**Master Ktulu**
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I'm sure you can Bro. Thank you
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thank you
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Np sg ideribikairtfsikiwgtbg! <------( abbreaviation)
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It means "no problem sistah girl, I didn't even read it beacause I knew after I read the first sentence it was going to be good"
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Yes can see why its an abbreacviation but have no idea what for,
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