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I wish

I love you but you don't love me!
This isn't how I wanted us to be!
You use to love me I remember it when you did.
They we're in the days that I was happy.
But you told me you don't love me.
Your only staying with me because you don't want to break my heart.
That hurts so much knowing your with me out of pity?
How weak do you think I am!
Do you think I can't hadle having my heart broken? Don't you realise what your doing now is worser then dumping me!
How can you just love me one day,and then next you don't!
I wish I understood you but you keep everything to yourself.

Its a freewrite I know its messy and needs fixing.

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  • ihsayd
    July 27
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    i like this one. if someone actually did that to you, thats really rude and mean. cant believe it.
    but its a good freewrite


  • Mad4life
    June 19
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    Harsh

    Thats cold for someone to do that to you. SO messed up. I love the poem but its sad that you have to go through this. I love the line " Do you think I can't hadle having my heart broken? Don't you realise what your doing now is worser then dumping me! " It speaks so many things.