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Class of '09

Today we crossed our tassel

From left to right we've grown

Accepting our diploma's

Then heading off to home

 

They say the hard part's over

Getting this far was the test

But now i'm out, roaming about

And life is far from best

 

College calls but so do bills

And that wallet's kinda dry

So I attempt to make the time

I promise that i'll try

 

Online, off, in person, each

I'm missing all my friends

But the real world pulls me outta reach

I'm trying to meet the ends

 

So i'll try and try, I swear I will

To come around some more

I guess my muse graduated too

I don't know what i'm writing for

 

Author notes

yeah life equals crazy. i really may not be back for a while, depressing but i'll try. i finally have computer back so THAT helps at least =)

-Katie


[Corrections Courtesy Catz] <<< Alliteration!!

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  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    June 27
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    And there is the gold
    Congrats
    I knew it

    This is definitly one of your best

    xxJeannette

  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    June 24

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    Wow....I think you wrote one of your best rhyming poems here...
    It's for sure that making money is a thing we all need to do, some years more than others....
    I know I am doing the same right now and it really leaves me not much time....

    XXJeannette


  • J aime Coudre silver member
    June 15

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    Well, I think this is one of the best and most acceptable excuses yet...

    Congratulations on your special tassel turning day. In this day of job scarcity I hope it all turns out well for you, which in the long run I am sure it will. Just hang in there, keep on penning poems in your spare time and don't worry, I hear all the muses are visiting over at Hughs castle...they soon will tire of that and return home where the belong..

    Thank you for taking time to enter this partners contest...a very nice entry at that..even if Catz did find a few errors ...she is a stickler for corectness in language and writing...and has been picking on me for over half a century..good thing she is my sister...Good luck in the contest.


  • catz Moderators member
    June 15
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    Finally, a pretty good excuse... sort of I know your days have sure been busy and demanding and it looks like they will be for awhile longer. It's good that you have your priorities in order.

    A good entry, well written, though just needs a little editing for capitolization and punctuation, probably a fatigued mind at work

    Good luck in the contest

    Dee


    • as.phy.xi.ate. silver member
      June 16
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      Thanks for the comment =) If you could point out the corrections i need i'll gladly fix them. Sad thing i just graduated and still while it's fresh in my mind I mess up. =D


      • catz Moderators member
        June 17
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        I'm sending you an IM with the corrections, there's just a few on not really big ones.
        Dee

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