Kiln.... Kiln... Time for school wake up sleepy head you cant miss the bus again and I have to have the car today. Okay mom I'm up. Kiln wakes up and gets ready for another day at school dragging his backpack he holds his head up and takes a deep breath, puts his backpack strap over one shoulder and awaits the bus wishing they didnt have to move to this new town and he thinks about his old school.
Good morning class, please sit and listen for the morning announcements. (A paperwad flies across the classroom and hits Kiln in the head, Kiln turns around.) Hey, cut it out... Oh good morning Samantha. Hey Kiln why dont you sit back here next to me, says Samantha. Kiln silently gets up and moves to the back of the classroom. So have you heard anything weird lately Kiln? Kiln replies, No what do you mean?
Well they have been talking about weird occurences going on here at the school after they had started the renivasions during the summer break and have you noticed that the janitor hasnt been here, he is always in the hallway I heard that they had found him dead in the bathroom that he had drown and thats why we were out for the week it wasnt because we had a gas leak, so what do you think?
I don't know Samantha I heard that there was a war here though a long time ago and this used to be an old hospital and there was a sanataruim on the third floor. The guy next door was talking to me about it when we first moved here. I heard that the sanitarium was shut down due to misterious events and that there was a massacre and still till this day there are bodies that have never been found. Samantha thinks for a minute then smiles and says, If you want we can go to the library together after school and look into the old newspaper articles together and see. Kiln looks at Samantha sure why not I dont have anything better to do today I guess.
Samantha smiles she has had a crush on Kiln since he first came to the school and she thinks that he is so hot, finally she has a chance to hang out with the new hunk and maybe even a shot at being his first girlfriend! ...........
Author notes
Hey thats all I can come up with. That way you get to use something about the janitor because I think that was a cool ideal and you can also use the thing idea about the past. Here in Kentucky where I live there is a place called Waverly Hills that is an old sanitarium and TB hospital so in a way I used it as an idea. You can look it up if you like where the story is going and read more about everything that had happened there. Its in Lousville Kentucky they made that horrble movie The body shute based on the events there. But they say that when you have renivations thats when you have more "ghostly activity". I hope you like the idea though and/or I have I could give you some inspiration good luck with the story though hun. If you like this idea though you can maybe leave it where he lives with his mother and they moved because his father was killed or something and when things start to get chaotic you can have his father come back in to guide him to give more deep emotion to the story. 
Good Luck and please write me and let me know what you think.
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this was just amazingly written. I liked the whole idea of what you started with. I may change a the name Kiln. Being the kiln is a device that dries clay after you make something. ex. A rose made of caly goes into the kiln and gets dried and hardened. This was amazing tho. It might just be what I was looking for but couldn't think of. As I read this I got the image of the idea's my mum had given me. Along with other ideas for the rest of the story.
Some insperation would be brillinat and thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
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