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moonlit dreams




i tripped beneath the stars,
as if for a lack of light.
my hand traced perfected
features, a sigh reminding
me the moment wouldn't last.
lips met mine as my heart
was so cleverly stolen.
i allowed myself one last
glance into his soul, past
aesthetic irises.

moonlight shining through
curtains woke me, mimicing
what stupid thoughts lingered
in my subconscience.



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