daddys little girl

They say misery loves company
But its solitude I desire most
The time for a companion has come and gone
Lost forever on that mournful day
Is it possible that Ive been abandoned?
Deserted by my daddy?

Can God really need him more than me?

With each memory more tears fall

My vision blurs as I sob uncontrollably

I guess realization has finally hit

Ill no be longer daddy's little girl

What did you think

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LovesLostLiterature
August 9
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Aw sunshine. This is so good! i lovers you lots sunshine!!!
ears2hearyou
July 3

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very touching ...makes our hearts want to cry with you.
I hope you remember that each time you smile..
your father smiles with you...for you are his blood
and dna child!
ears/Seattle
PassionsPromise
July 2

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alot of emotion that grabs the heart of the reader
thank you for sharing

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passions
individuality
July 2

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a good poem, sadness here, such is life i suppose, it holds death, and those that leave life leave behind the tears of those alive, grief is natural.
WritethePainAway
July 1

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chills.... this is what I've been trying to write for three years now. not the same reasons I'm sure. but same emotions none the less. great penmenship