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13 black eyed susans (ZEN)

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I do believe
that the small corners of the earth
filled with flowers now
 exist to remind us that

heaven is here with us on always

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  • Macsword
    June 15
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    I believe that too...

    Well done poet.

  • if heaven is here on earth, does that make me god - yes, i think it does, i am claiming the title and will fight anyone who tries to sit in my chair - a good poem.

    • Draig aine gold member
      June 15
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      my humble thanks and a grin

      do you remember the Peter Otolle movie the ruling class, where each afternoon, he climbs up on a cross and hangs, when asked why he thought he was God, he replied, simple, each time I talk to him , I find I am talking to my self,
      That line has haunted me for years, weird the stuff that sticks, ho?


  • Shantti
    June 15

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    Oh this is beautiful. You did an awesome job here hon.

    My favorite part


    I do believe
    that the small corners of the earth
    filled with flowers now
    exist to remind us that
    heaven is here with us on earth




  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    June 15

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    excellent

    I love black eyed Susan's
    Enjoyed the read very much
    Best of luck in the contest
    Susan~~~


  • DolceVito gold member
    June 14
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    Beautiful


    • Draig aine gold member
      June 15
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      my humble thanks and a grin dear vito

      you make me smile


    • Draig aine gold member
      June 15
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      my humble thanks and a grin dear vito

      each time i SEE YOUR FACE AND READ YOUR WORDS i SMILE, YOU BRIGHTEN MY DAY!!


  • whitecoffee
    June 14
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    wonderful sentiment that I want to remember...


    • Draig aine gold member
      June 14
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      my humble thanks and a grin

      unfortualty my garden is unweildy and un weeded, oh when will it stop raining!!!

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