Oh the heartache of loving you,
Can't touch you,
can't see your sweet face,
can't hear your sweet voice,
yet the joy i feel when thoughts of you
cross my mind...
I dream you are here,
holding me, and then
I wake up to only air,
holding me.
I dream I felt your arms around me,
then I wake up, and you are not there,
I dream I felt you kissing me,
but then it was just a dream...
I dream of a day when these
dreams end with a fairytale,
but what i want to know,
can these feelings of love
and longing, of desire, hopes and dreams,
can they kill you?
It feels like I am gonna explode with love,
but the emptiness,
so abundant that when I don't hear your voice,
I can't feel your arms, your kisses,
i would rather just dig a hole,
and hide, and wait for the day
when our fairytale is a reality.......
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i can relate to this so much its fantastic!!!!
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this is very good! but i have to agree with paladin warrior i to think it is more the emptiness that hurts us more.
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Hi girl, For me it not the love that kills, it the emptiness. When your love latchs on to someone special, and you feel this something you cant explian. When that person is no longer thier the void of emptyness will always be
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I think this may be one of your best yet. This so heartwarming, yet so sad and poignant. The emotion and affectio you have for another is finely put forth here for all to see. You did it so darn well,my dear. It almost sounds that he is still alive, at least alive for you. Great writing,
John
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I've felt this way as you know. The emotion you put into your poetry is remarkable. The title is fantastic!
Love,
Amera
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i know this feeling so well as you are aware love and passion can be so intense and frustrating when seas and mountains block the path but precious its all part of great love not just some whimsical fling and its worth a pang we pay .
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Sis you know very well whom i am thinking of when i read this paralleling my life and the tears flow from love and emptiness - somedays i feel as though i am better off in the hole you speak of in the write and not be missed, well done and i hope oneday your dreams come alive and true for you (at least one of us deserves happiness it deff should be you!! well done and many blessings always xxx
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Oh my, so sad.
Like my thoughts you are so on cue,girl!
I have once thought love could kill you, it hurts so bad but it feels so good too. I know it is very confusing..I really loved this!
Brilliant write my dear friend!
Love ya bunches,Mandi
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