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"Stay."

Today’s love flows into lucid dreams;
A parallel of the fantasy.
Deceit meets truth,
The creation of this reality,
And those tears, nothing more than a nightmare.
Let me stay, amidst my bliss
And ignorance;
So beautiful…so pure…so Real.

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Sometimes I think I'd even desire to feel this; just the ability to feel Love. The words have been spoken to me more times than I care to remember, but why is it that because of this, I wonder whether it has made me cold? Time after time, people fall in love and yet they don't even truly know what they're infatuated with.

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    November 21
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    So true

    Oh its not the words you listen to its their actions that tells all
    GREAT work here


  • Sweet-Sins
    June 18

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    that is exremely good i loved every part!

    i wish this part was true 4 me:
    Today’s love flows into lucid dreams;
    !!
    still its brilliant!
    xx

  • Let me stay, amidst my bliss
    And ignorance;
    So beautiful…so pure…so Real.

    I love these lines...so true!! there is no unknowing once you know...

  • Bobby41
    June 16
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    So honest short and to the point I like it

  • "lucid dreams", "parallel of fantasy", "creation of reality" "nightmare", I loved how these words played off of eachother through to the end~ "So beautiful... So pure... So real." Awesome!! Amber

  • Bobby41
    June 15
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    I can relate I'm home alone but I love it very honest and true

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