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Gypsy Via Orleans

Gypsy Via Orleans,
the name is not as explanatory as it seems.
Without known blood ties to those of old,

I still feel just as nomadic.
My people too

have been stereotyped by ones whose tales aren't sporadic.
I'm not a wealthy woman, I live on average means.
I was truly quite content in the city of New Orleans.
A hurricane named Katrina uprooted me from this home.
Thus began my journey which makes body and spirit roam.

I spent a night on open highway,

third in my family's caravan of six cars.
My emotions were in an uproar, against each other raging war.
The next day at a truck stop so exhausted I thought I'd drop,
I was asked by a Natchez deputy if I needed a place to stay.
He then took me to his church where for months my head would lay.

When my city was deemed safe again, I was eager to return.
Without friends and neighbors, the loneliness made me yearn
for a semblance of lost happiness sans another fear-filled night.
So from my home once more I knew I'd soon take flight.

Back I ran to Mississippi's dirt roads and rich red clay.
I've tried to plant my dying roots in hopes of here I'll stay.
Still I feel this daily itch beneath my feet.
It tells my new found Gypsy blood, staying put is obsolete.
A voice keeps whispering to this Gypsy Via Orleans.
"Go home my child and stop your soul's loud screams."

Author notes

I started this for a contest held by an 11 year old.
As I wrote, I realized I would not enter it into the contest.
But, in writing this I came to realize why I've been in such a blue mood lately.
It is time for me to go home.
Thank you "longlife" for the eyeopener.

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  • Mark Rickerby gold member
    October 25

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    I really enjoyed this. I've never been to New Orleans but I have so many beautiful images dancing in my head about it every time I hear the name.

    We've all heard that old law of physics - an object in motion stays in motion, an object at rest stays at rest. Sounds like your forced move from your beloved home awoke or reawakened your wandering spirit. I hope you're back in "N'awlin's" and happy, but hey, there's nothing wrong with having a launching pad for new adventures! Even gypsies had their covered caravans.

    Take care,

    Mark


  • Lowell Poe
    September 28
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    my sweet gypsy star...
    i love this.....
    you and I are one in the same.

    bless you little gypsy
    Liam


  • penStock
    September 13

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    You're already comment-famous for this but allow me to be redundant.
    It does have a slow blues feel, in a hidden smoky room, sharing homemade spirits.
    I like the line "Still I feel this daily itch beneath my feet".

    Clio Street, Orleans, must be inviting if you once lived there.


  • guardianhost gold member
    August 15

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    Insightful, Heartfelt

    The horrific loss of life and property could not prevent the rebuilding of New Orleans, A strong message of survival and family commitment rings through out ...yet the desire calling you home. Well done a emotional piece for those of us who lived through or had our families torn by hurricane Katrina.  Well said, well done. Thank you for reminding us that home is where the heart is.
    May all your days be sunny and bright.
    Cheryl


  • Ellis gold member
    August 13

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    Outstanding poem

    I wonder if you are back in New Orleans yet? This is so real and is written so well it puts us right with you, right with your thinking. I love that you are so honest and straightforward -- as this comes across through your poems (and on your Profile Page).


  • Still Standing gold member
    August 11

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    How I miss this?

    You are an amazing poet. You tell a story with your words and your rhyme as I say all the time is off.the.HOOK!!! I'm like how is she going to rhyme nomadic. But you did! My goodness I felt I was there with you in the car, in the church, in Mississippi. You took us that never experienced a diaster of this kind on a journey with you. I experienced what you did!!! Thanks


  • kennethlaney
    July 28
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    Very Good

    Interesting as always my friend. Many people don't realize the power of a gift called "HOME"! Though we may travel, wether good or bad our upbringing, we always have memories of a place called "HOME". Although I was born and raised in Va. I lived the majority of my life away from home. Gone from 1976 to 2006 I still consider Richmond to be my home. Hope you are well. Been real busy lately but hope to be able to spend a little time back on this site soon. Your friend "BOO".

  • homesick

    from beginning to end it is a tale of homesickness...longing for your roots to be planted again in the soil you were uprooted from.....go home my child you know where you belong.....God is Good that contest was this poems testimony and your fate to return home.....well written.....love peace & harmony


  • Peripatetic gold member
    July 22

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    The poem has a graceful rhythm in its long flowing lines and unforced rhyme. The narrative is matter of fact, nostalgic without being maudlin, with a genteel sentimentality. The reader can feel the loss, but also sense the strength and hope in the spirit of this story. And a story it is, told in the manner of pre-literate cultures, using mnemonic devices of rhythm and rhyme to pass on and preserve the history of family, community and society.

  • Papagallo
    July 22
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    Hello there loved your poem.

    Nice to see a New Orleanian here. We know what sea-food is about

  • Papagallo
    July 22

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    This is a beautiful poem. It saddens my heart what Katrina did to the city I wonder if I will ever get back before I die. Most people will never realize what was lost. I wish you luk in your writings and look forward toward your works.


  • jkj2692
    July 21

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    BEAUTIFUL! this is so sad yet it seems you are handling this very well! This must have been very heartfelt. I hope your days go on well

  • Excellent...

    I can feel the powerful art and knowledge of the Quill of the author of "Gypsy Via Orleans", but I lack the seraphic words to express them. One think I can say is that I have no doubt that Erato and Clio petitioned to Phoebus to make daily visits to her.

    I have enjoyed the reading of a majestic poem.... "Gypsy Via Orleans" glows.

    In gratitude and admiration,

    Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


  • condor gold member
    July 18

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    Just ad of much hardship and pain andorable! I know how you feel. I left my home state and went to live in Queensland for a year and got terribly homesick. I came back and have been happy ever since. May though move to South Aussie when i retire. The quiet life. Your poem spoke of a yearning which comes from being parted from your roots. Go home, girl and be happy. your soul needs its peace. Wonderful write filled with emotion and love.

  • arnal
    July 18
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    A very well written poem nice thoughts,enjoyed

  • Powerful!!

    Your words and their meaning really struck a chord with me. I can relate. Who among us cannot understand the feelings of and about our "home" - it's part of being human, I think. May your roots be found, nurtured, grow long, and live happy!! Thank you for sharing your story. I believe this awesome poem is very worthy - I would have given it the golden chalice myself. It's all so poetically profound, but I think my favorite two lines are:
    "A hurricane named Katrina uprooted me from this home.
    Thus began my journey which makes body and spirit roam."
    Write on, shine on, Gypsy Via Orleans!!
    Peace, love & hugs,
    xx Cyn xx


  • afroqban
    July 14

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    now i am just kicking myself for not readng this sooner. oooooh weeeeeee. im gonna have fun stalking your page.


  • Antebellum
    July 11

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    My emotions were in an uproar, against each other raging wars.


    'other' should be 'others'

    Very interesting. I never would have came up with something like this.

    • merriam webster online dictionary definition of the word "other"

      1. a. being the one (as of two or more) remaining or not included.
      b. being the one or ones distinct from that or those first mentioned or implied.
      2. not the same.
      There was more to this definition but, I believe this sums it up.
      "against each other raging war" meaning each emotion battling with the next .

  • pkoirish
    July 10
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    keep whispering

    believe me i understand


  • WuzGood
    July 10

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    Wow, I really love this, its sad really, I feel for you and all those effected by Katrina, Ive been through 3 hurricanes here in Florida and a tree fell on my house, but this was nothing close to the devastation caused there, I enjoyed reading this as it is true, its heart felt, the rhyming was excellent and the wording was amazing!!! Such emotion and details that describe you as a strong woman.
    I loved it.


  • mcope8050
    July 6
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    wow,,,,

    an intriguing write,,,, what a tradgedy Katrina is/was,,,, you seem so in touch with the very depth of your being and soul here,,, I don't think I'd recognize these feelings much less be able to express them effortlessly as you've done here,,, well done ,,, ANOTHER enjoyable read from you,,, thanks,,, michael

  • I can't even begin to imagine the turmoil that you have and are still going through, but your words have gone some way to helping me to understand your plight.
    May you be happy in all you do.

    Sue

  • this is truly a stunning and unique right. beautifully written. reminds me of my own "gypsy blood"

    the last stanza was absolutely brilliant. a great clincher.


  • ladylyric
    June 30
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    Your poem really moved me. I do hope you go home and stop your soul's loud scream's.


  • Fox.
    June 28
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    I can relate to this in many ways. One day I hope you will find the peace in which you desire.


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    June 22

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    Wow. That is absolutely beautiful. The emotions were fantastic and the rhymes didn't get in the way. Wow.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~

  • Ah what a feeling to have nowhere to go that's really home. My prayers go out to you for any past, current, or future hardship, but, obvious from your poems, you'll always find a way. Thank you for sharing this write.


  • Eric Marsh
    June 20

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    wow

    like a previous person said, you name attracted me to your page. it reminded me of my one and only hero, who opened the eyes and mind and made me what i am today..a free spirit....just like you.....i'm sure if hendrix where here today he would know exactly how you feel, he would build you a joint chill, hope he'd build me one too cos i just ran out lol. you are a great poet and this poem tells me you are a great person. keep happy and keep writng..thanks..


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    June 19

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    loved it....no wonder .......your rocked.....
    and ruled our last contest as QUEEN!

    Perhaps it is time for to throw a BIG OLE BARBECUE
    and have everyone bring their favorite dish...
    and TURN YOUR BLUES and JaZZ Heaven music
    up loud..to feed your soul some strength!

    Go knock on doors and invite neighbors you never
    even knew lived there!
    for....I ..have not met...a shy southener!
    LOve Ya OUR QUEEN!
    ears/Seattle


  • Antipodi
    June 17

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    Wow a true Mississippi Queen ...the one that song is written about is you your beautiful poem confirms it ...it has true music in its verse ...a very enjoyable read dear poet


  • DeeDee
    June 17

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    Doreatha, You know your are in my heart, I feel the pain in so many things that you write. I wish that I could say something to lighten your hearts burden. This is a heart busting poem, again your talent as a writer goes far & beyond. You put your soul out there in the words you share with us time & time again....PS, before you "go home," don't forget, we are going to meet up in Memphis and listen to some real blues!

  • WOW

    Powerful, heartfelt, gut wrenching........just WOW.

    I do know the feeling all too well but I do believe you have put it into words way better than I could ever hope to.

  • ahhh this made me all teary eyed, I have moved all over the US and often felt that same tug in the heart pulling me back home. I came to realize that this is where my roots are and no matter where I may be at the time NY is home. This was beautiful.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    June 15

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    this so beautiful

    so raw, and real, i have such great respect for you black woman, you are strong..excellent heartfelt write..


  • LAPoe gold member
    June 15

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    Go home wayward travler there has to be a place there for you somewhere??? I hope! Your poems are so telling, and deep and emotional. Your pain is screaming and it's trying to tell you something important.. follow your heart.

    laurie


  • Raspy
    June 15
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    Beautiful

    My girlfriend and i were talking long distance last nyt brutalizing her phone bill. One of the topics was what you so beautifuly expressed," If only we would watch,listen and learn from the children,this world may not be in this decaying,decadent,unjust,state"
    Good luck,sweet lady!
    S.

  • Well We all get homesick..But this is far from your home, I could only imagine how you feel.
    For I have always Lived in Georgia,and I have never had to leave my home..I am in a blue mood tonight
    and as i read your piece it left a sadness upon my heart because of you and all of the ones who suffered from that tragic event,all of you who lost their homes,their treasures, And just basicly their whole lives..It really sadens me to know that nature could produce such a horrible thing as she is quite a beauty!
    Loved the read,and very thought provoking!
    Great job!
    -Mandi

  • wow, this is a really good emotional poem.

    your name is what first drew me to your page.

    I have gypsy blood(Bohemian Czech) so I was curious at your name.

    it makes me wonder why my own ppl started wandering everywhere.

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