Little pretty one
May I dance with you
Can I hold you in my arms
For I'll always love you true
Let me spin you round the floor
As we laugh so happily
Singing with the song
How jealous everyone will be
But they'll have to wait their turn
Cause you're still my little girl
And nothings better in the world
Than when we spin and laugh and twirl
Author notes
I love this picture! http://silverwaves.deviantart.com/art/Dancing-little-girl-88017806
A contest entry
- "I hope you dance..." by DeJaBlue.
450 points, ended June 16, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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So Sweet!!!!!!
An adorable poem to match the picture. Reminds me of my daughter years ago and now the granddaughters. Always a delight to read your poetry Hugs and Smiles. Sandy
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A delightful write...I'm still smiling.
Heartwarming....love it.
Congrats on your HM.
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Thanks Jesaan.
I use to love to do this with my daughter when she was little and she loved it too! 
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my daddy is like this!!!
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Thats great that your dad is like that! Dads love to dance with their little girls. I know I do with my daughter. She loves it.
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Aww how adorable this is! It's so light, happy and wonderful! Best of luck on an excellent write.
Linda
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Thanks Linda! It brought back some great memories for me.
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Every father should dance with their little girls It makes wonderful memories. This one made me smile so big. Thanks so much for entering.
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My pleasure blue! I really enjoyed it.
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smiling ear to ear... there is nothing better thatn to feel so special ti someone else. loved this
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Thanks! She used to stand on my feet and dance with me till she got alot bigger. She is 18 and still dances with me once in a blue moon just for fun. Then she remembers its not cool to be seen having fun with her dad like that.
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beautiful, love it...mystic
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Thanks mystic! I loved to dance with her. So much fun.
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