What if i said i'd wait
For a lifetime, an eternity
What if i refused to walk away
Out of your life, out of your way
Well i dont know my fate
Why cant you see
Your making me bleed
Why stand in the shadows
While im submerged in misery
All i need is you
All i want is you
But why can't you see
What if i told you to stay
Right in my arms, in my heart
What if i fought til the end
Til my last breath, my last beat
Darling my life's turning grey
I'm begging
[Im pleading]
Im lying on the floor
Im screaming
[Im crying]
You're walking out the door
Im begging
[Im crying]
Im lying on the floor
[Im screaming]
Im crying
I just wanted MORE!
Why cant you see
Your making me bleed
Why stand in the shadows
While im submerged in misery
All i need is you
All i want is you
But why can't you see
Why can't you see {why can't you see]
Author notes
Yea..meant to be a song.
Guys and Gals, i know this is crap. but actually when i was writing this i closed the window by accident so i lost everything and had to start from sratch.
I did -and was stupid enough to do it again.
So i had to start again.
And here we are.
lol
im planning to work more on this.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i think it's pretty good. there are a few places where the flow is off a little, but it doesn't mess with the song to bad. i really like it, and its very relatable. great job.
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I thought it was good. Some grammar mistakes, but overall pretty good.
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