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The Dark Hours of Affinity

Nightfall was eager for us as it uncoiled on the skyline,
behind faint lights, it appeared like spilt red wine;
our pupils constricted against the moon’s vivid gaze
as we frisked unsteadily through the shadow’s maze.

Relentless vines embraced the liquor-ridden floor,
rekindling the memories of what we used to live for;
our past melted beneath the warmth of the moonlight
as we breathed in the promising shade of the night.

Guts quivered behind nicotine-stained fingers
as our youthful bones bathed in laughter;
under the scrutiny of the stars, love unfurled,
as if it was the most common element in the world.

I drifted to sleep and saw their faces in my mind
where our moments of bliss and misery entwined;
never again shall my tears journey in loneliness,
for I know, they are here, beside me, in the darkness.

Author notes

In life, friends come and go but I know, with all my heart, that these people will stay with me forever. I'll be leaving the country for college in a few months and they don't know yet. I'll be telling them soon.

I will never forget them. And it's good to know that there will be family waiting for me when I come back. <3

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  • Wow, this is so good! I love your storytelling skills! So amazing, you should really enter this in a contest!


  • Xx.Toxic.xX
    June 25

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    wow. this is amazing. i can't wait to see what you come up with for my contest, and i wish you the best of luck with this one.

    you're an amazing writer. keep it up.