We picked two green chillies
and sucked the skins dry
under the olive-popped
sun
He stood leather thick and
pushed his hands to my
hot red stem
gathering me like seeds
in his wetted palm.
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- erotica (from the girls POV) by Odd Thomas.
400 points, ended July 5, 13 entries
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Well isn't this a pretty picture, I love chillies you know nothing can ever be hot enough for this old cast iron guts that are slowly rotting to core but damn it now I must have me some super hot thai for lunch.
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Well I must say that this is absolutely beautiful.
The erotic imagery is sensational, very hot.
Splendidly written in vivid colour and taste.
Best to you in all you do.
Tony
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Hot damn! This is super. This has got to be one of my favs. Ain't nuthin sexier than fruits and veggies! All kidding aside, this is sensuous, humorous, and well written! Brava!
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Damn....
olive popped
leather thick
and hot red stem
paint me a picture why dontcha!
sizzles
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I love this. Its suggestive and hot, but not pornographic and in your face. Beautifully, erotically intimate.
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Hotter than a pepper sprout
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