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Just A Dream

You are my happy place,
my slice of heaven.
Someone that is peaceful
and graceful as god.
A wonderful paradise,
like being in love
for the first time.
Like listening to soft
beautiful music.
Just being in your presence
makes me feel as if you
are the world,
the one thing i live for.
And with one look into
your eyes i know,
all that i want is there
right in front of me.
But if i blink even once,
I'm afraid you will be gone,
just a dream.

Rayne you are my beautiful dream!!!!!!!!!

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