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By nights shadow

By nights shadow, i practice my art.
under its darkened veil i traverse the city,
unhindered by the crowds of rich mundanity,
free from my shackles, I'm a world apart.

in a world that is forever guided,
i am that which moves unhindered,
through the darkness,
it breathes, pulses, alive.

city streets abandoned, beautiful,
street lamps and moonlight my only guide,
i traverse the city streets and rooftops,
a free man.

my breath against the silence,
soft shoes against the rooftops,
the kiss of air mid jump,
as the coolness of darkness,
caresses bare arms.

i land with a roll,
forward momentum,
total control,
still i run, and still,
to the edge of reason, and past it till

like a babe born anew,
i place my hands on my knees,
and breathe deeply the air,
that even itself seems awakened.

Fresh, pure and unaltered,
mine. life in every breath,
and in every part of me,
By nights Shadow, i am free.

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  • Iain White
    June 18
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    thanks guys im glad you like it


  • Kathraina silver member
    June 16

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    Wow the last line packs a real punch!
    I love the story you've created here. Marvelous flow and imager throughout this piece.
    Bravo


    ♥ Kate

  • I like this write it has such beautiful depth flow and its amazin what you did with this prompt. your poem is just awesome. I love your title and how it all came together any ways just a brilliant well penned poem and keep up the good work and good luck in the contest