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To my puppy...

Wakeing up on Christmas...i went stright to the tree...
there you where just waiting for me.
A fluffy stuffed dog...with glassey eyes...
you hadn't yet seen all my lies.

You've seen alot...and still always smiled...
comforting,suporting, a hurt child.
You saw my first tooth come out...you saw my first cut...
you stayed beside me no matter what.

I love you Ginger...that is true...
it doesn't matter you always knew.
My faitful puppy...now brown and shaggy...

your beautiful coat now worn and baggy.

 

You witnessed alot...but still stood by my side...

thank you my puppy, for waiting out the ride.

I'll keep you forever...even when i grow old...

you'll always know my stories told.

 

 

 

 





 

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This is about my stuffed dog Ginger i've had her since i was 5...i luv her to death...and i was board...

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  • Emotional-Me gold member
    November 25
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    I love ur poem "To My Puppy..." that is exactly what happened with my puppy, except i didn't get her for christmas, i got her because i was so lonely.


  • XxXbenjiXxX
    July 30
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    :)

    i really liked the emotion put into this..keep writing


  • Blue-Rose Beauty gold member
    July 28
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    A fluffy stuffed dog...with glassey eyes...
    you hadn't yet seen all my lies.

    Awkward lines.

    Sweet poem though


  • dhampir-child
    July 23
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    pupppy buddies


  • Dearly Beloved...
    July 21

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    this was a very sweet poem
    the rythming was good and the messages you put in it show nicely thank for the comment


  • Unbreakable3
    July 9

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    That is one of the cutest prettiest odes I've ever read. You can see the faithfulnessgiven to thre inanimate object andit really toched a lot of people i bet


  • xeroabyss II
    July 7

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    Some friends are eternally faithful and unjudging
    I like the feel of super fluffy cuteness in this, amid the reality of your despair.
    -cheers


  • Allyson.Lashae.
    July 1

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    awww I just love this much, it is so sweet, it makes me love your stuffed dog Ginger and she isn't even mine haha


  • UnicornSparkleVomit
    June 30
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    I have a stuffed bear thats like really old. Shes seen everything.


  • CrushPuppy
    June 28
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    awww...*bark!*


  • ever-wondering
    June 27

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    I have a stuffed dog.
    There the day I was born,
    Its seen all I've made,
    And all my life has torn.

  • shattered.love
    June 27

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    This is amazing, i like this a lot, great job, i really liked taking the time to read this, you did something great here, keep writing and i will be sure to keep my eye on you in the future because i loved this a lot, i can't say it enough, once again, great great job

    shattered.love


  • vampire - kisses
    June 20
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    this is really good


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    June 18

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    This is a really good write you have. Thank you for commenting and sharing yours. It was a pleasure to read.


  • TwiztidMaggot
    June 17
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    aw that's cute. lol. I like it.

    TwiztidMaggot


  • X-Dark as Night-X
    June 17

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    awww destiny...that was amazing!It was like you poured your heart out into it! Your writing skills are B.A.-and keep your stuffed friends, because they will always be there 4 u!


  • awannabepoet
    June 16
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    Awe, this is just fabulous. I love how the feelings and a tinge of sadness came through here.


  • dhampir-child
    June 16
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    pwetty

    is soo pwetty dogs are great lol can u please reviem my latest please

  • Perfect Insanity
    June 15

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    This is lovely hun. You wrote this with a lot of affection and emotion. Your writing skills are really good. Its true, sometimes the inanimate things are the ones that stay longer with us.


  • beautiful.obsession
    June 14
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    awww thats sweet :] loved it


  • Random Goldfish gold member
    June 14
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    I love this. Our stuffed friends will always be there; they won't judge you and sometimes just by holding them and releasing all your thoughts and emotions they can heal you. I might give too much credit to them but, heh. I have (don't laugh) a Pikachu doll that I've had since I was 8 years old and I still sleep with it at night.

    Síochán leat
    ~Mairéad~


  • BlindingLove
    June 14
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    awww dats sweet!!!


  • Fallen-Thumper
    June 14
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    awww thats really sweet and i loved it, amazing and really well written, i loved the rhyme


  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    June 14
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    (: cooll poem i loved it.


  • Bullets
    June 14

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    Cool. I have a teddy bear, not a dog. But I still carry her around even now. Call me crazy but I still love her
    Cute poem.
    -Bullets


  • Allyson.Lashae.
    June 14
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    Wow this is so cute! I love this so so much
    It is very good! I'm impressed!


  • Misguided Truth
    June 14
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    Aww, so cute :]


  • xshatteredxdreamsx
    June 14
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    i love it!!!!


  • Poisonous-Kisses
    June 14
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    That's cute...but if you really look into the poem its kind of sad...i really like your poetry...

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