My pain, my pride, my own will denied
The sorrow of my fear, these scars are mine
Come here my children
Gather around to hear
And I will tell you a story
That has never before been told
I will tell you a secret
Upon centuries old
My life has been a prison
A fierce disturbance of the past
A steady apocalypse for the future
A labyrinth built beneath my soul
This mountain of tragedy
I’m a stain upon the sacred sheet
I’m just a mere after thought
But how I
Would die
For this…
Through the veins of the decay
And the vines of the richest blood
I’ll remain to betray
To live like Caesar
And to die like Jesus
To style my own herding
Of sacrificial damnation of religion
Fuck the morality of mortal man
Have no gods, no laws
Forsaken and ashamed
To watch them each and all
Crawling, slithering beneath us…
Upon the crucifix of embedded nails
Of hollowness and regret
Dying of the fevers
Blistering the nerve
Sweating betrayal
I cry…
My flesh peeling
My demines in rot
My enemies in plot
I am made of pages
Of paragraphs and inspirations
Of rhyme and rhythm
Of beauty and death
Of sexuality and philosophy
I pass this passions flame
Furry has bestowed
I pass this flame unto you
Murder, mayhem, hurt her, hate him
Murder, mayhem, slice her, kill him
Rampage, vulgar, fuck them, slay them
My pain, my pride,
The lies before my eyes
Has misery been formulated to be an equation?
Did sanity write a note of suicide?
But everyone one of us is illiterate
And the other is blinded
My first mortality of treason
Was to picking up a pen
My first act of love
Was by trying to find myself again
Complications are compared
Is when I was standing up to you…
Justice has rained upon the weary souls
Now’ I’m off my knees
And now you’re begging me please
I’m the master and the apprentice
The scar and the scab
The wound and the weapon
The fracture and the fist…
So let it be written
So let it be done
That I am stabbing in your heart
And creating a black hole
In your worthless soul
Slowly ripping you apart
The brighter they shine
The sparkle they gleam
The darker we become
And morbid we may seem…
Vae victus!
Author notes
Just something that I rattled off...not sure if it is really that great or not, but I know I enjoyed writing it!
Comments
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Deep and Amazing!
The way you write is inspiring! Continue your art! Phenomenal exerts and applications from Otep's Nein!
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Nice, can add blasphemy to go along with the seven!
Anyhell, I dig this write.
The expressions of anger, frustration and confusion strike out and waylay the thoughts.
You invoke and evoke many a same sentiment about the general discontent of humanity, and our disembodied disposition to the natural world as we become distant abominations, seperating ourself from our birthmother earth, and evolving/mutating into...well, I guess only future time will tell what we become.
But yeah, wicked write.
-cheets

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Breath-taking
This was truly amazing. You really are a brilliant writer.
I believe that it was my favourite poem you have on here.
It was so full of feeling. I wanted to cry, but I have no more tears tonight.
I hung on every word until the end.
" Murder, mayhem, hurt her, hate him
Murder, mayhem, slice her, kill him
Rampage, vulgar, fuck them, slay them"
My favourite lines used. So incredibly powerful.
I wish there were more then three clappy dudes to give.

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YAY!!!
Hey! you got it up =)
so I'm guessing AP is working for you again! and you know what that means? COMMENT MY POEMS! lol!
this is really cool Xanatwo! and it would seem that you are getting your muse back, and that of course makes me happy!
my fav line is "Did sanity write a note of suicide?" I've always wondered if mine ever did....*shrugs*
anywho this is awesome and so are you!
miss you like CRAZY!
~Avalon




