magical fingertips open the poem
lips of love reads its smooth glide
essence of wine flows from a fountain
that speaks of berries and walks
in the vineyards of long ago eves
tears streamed as the poem presented
courses of chilled blood through her veins
trembles of ecstasy longed to reign supreme
jagged thoughts of wild nights passion
never to be repeated with urgent intensity
lost in poetry she made her last wistful wish
knowing forever would never be their destiny
opportunity knocked as the door slammed shut
the knob was lost and never replaced again
broken and shattered like the crumbled paper
she let go to watch it flow in the arrogant wind
Author notes
Lost Love
A contest entry
- Prewrites by Dragonbabyx3.
800 points, ended July 6, 73 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
1 - 5 of 5
-
A sad story, beautifully written! Thanks for commenting on my poetry.
-
You did an excellent job with the imagery in this piece. your words flowed perfectly. Lovely words you have created here! Thankyou for entering my contest, and Good Luck
-
I love this poem, it spoke to me and left me with a sigh
Beautiful
-
how beautiful, I truly loved this part. magical fingertips open the poem
lips of love reads its smooth glide
essence of wine flows from a fountain
that speaks of berries and walks
in the vineyards of long ago eves
-
she let go to watch
it flow in the arrogant wind
honey this is awesome sorry you missed the contest
but your wrote this poem proud
I love the way you express your feelings
you always make me smile
well done love you baby♥
Adding your comment:
1 - 5 of 5
