Dawn skated intensely
I lost my own way,
Dusk flung me around
Now apples eat paths
Pears conquer words
and mangos kiss lips
praying sunlit streaks
will always stay forever.
A contest entry
- Poems about nothing by jmk8602.
1750 points, ended July 1, 30 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I guess this is the sort of dream you can have if you fall asleep having washed down a strong curry with cointreau on ice after reading a cosmetics catalogue.
Congrats on the silver. -
awesome.
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how fruity this is delish indeed
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Perfectly painted
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Very pleasant, evocative of a beach holiday in far north Queensland, Australia
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