A rainbow has touched the butterfly’s wings
Its colors so beautifully bright
It woke with the dawn - of the coming of day
And rose on its pre morning flight
A rainbow had rained on the flowers below
Where the butterfly hovered today
The glorious shades of their petals conveyed
That the spring was well on its way
A rainbow had touched the butterfly’s wings
As it fluttered on by me this morn
A rainbow had given me hope for the day
As it came forth to meet me at dawn
9.7.2006
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Awww
Great Image the reader is left with. loved how calming it was as well. well done
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Thank you so much for reading. I will drop by as soon as i catch up with all the reads for the week.
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wow thats beautful
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Thanks, mate. I appreciate your reading.
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That was a nice read. Rhyme and flow just right. Puts a smile on your face..
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Thanks, mate. Glad i could make you smile. (hate to see people cry)...
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Superb Plus
'tis quite the marvelous write, indeed. Imagery; rhythm, and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us. -
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Thank you so much for your wonderful comments.
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beautiful and the poem is beautiful, too.
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so beautiful!
Your words show such beauty. I like "A rainbow has touched the butterfly’s wings." Such an enchanting thought.
Your rhyming is excellent, as always.
Great write, as usual my friend.
Jeannette
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Thank you so much for your kind words. There is nothing more delicate than a butterfly.
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What a wonderful write sweetie, well done.
Beautiful Girl
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Thanks, mate. I didn't enter this in a contest though.
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Sorry sweetie, I thought it was, how's that.
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I can see the beauty in these simple lines going together just like the rainbow, and they melt to produce a magic display of colourful thought, really well put together.
I knew Gaylene would love this too,,butterflies are close to her. Beautifully written, well done.
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Thank you so much for your lovely words. I knew you would appreciate the beauty in the butterfly.
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Thank you so much for your lovely thoughts. I believe if anyone can understand the beauty, it would be you.
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Oh how precious and so very beautiful! Such touching thoughts and images you made with this poem Just gorgeous. And 3 years on your talent styill shines
Gaylene 
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Brilliant piece of writing Lee, I can see the butterflies flitting around. Your imagery is excellent and rhyme and rhythm beautiful. Takes me back to the rain forests in PNG where butterflies ar legend.
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Thanks, Bob. Glad you liked this. Your comments are always much appreciated.
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Delightful...
I love Butterflies and your poem paints a beautiful picture. Imagery as usual is awesome 
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Thanks julie. Glad you liked it.
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