Ladies and Gentlemen, Boys and Girls
Have we got a show for you today
Watch as my hopes rise once again
But get trampled down anyway
Don't worry folks, we've got a plan
Even if it may sound just a little crude
For just $5 you can beat me
Until my body matches my mood
Help me exhale my darkest dreams
And place me, broken, on display
This is a once in a lifetime opportunity
So don't let your chance at greatness slip away
Author notes
Once again, I seem to have stumbled upon a terrible rift in what was a happy existence. Such is life, I suppose...
Comments
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I really like this. The message is very depressing but the tone is so upbeat, it adds a nice bit of irony and inconsistency. Bit like I feel, put on a happy face but inside feel like I'm being beaten.
Well great write, and chin up.
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I actually like this piece....
If I give you $10, do I get to beat your brains to useless mush?
Well written, and here's to hoping you find a way out of that rift, David.
Bravo
'D' (Scott)
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