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God Please Hear My Cry!!

What im feeling is nothing but pain
my family is all seperated
the only man i would ever call dad (my step dad)
is in jail once again
my mom struggling more than ever
got two brothers in prison
a sister in the navy
and other siblings all living their own lives
one of my good ass friends someone i call my cousin is now in a group home because her dad hits her
it always seems like my life is fucked up
something good happens then two bad
all i want is to get my family straight
i pray and ask the lord to bring them happiness

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  • Keep your head high and never let life get you down even when it seems you've gotten as low as you could go...love the emotion your poetry is so raw

  • awww its ok ill always be here for you sissy i love you and miss you

    • DeSiBoO14
      July 1
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      AwWw!!SiSSy..I LUV N MISS U 2!!

      • what have you been up too?? hows your summer>???? my baby got out of jail im been prety bored and theres nothing to do


        • DeSiBoO14
          July 1
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          My SuMmErS pReTtY gUd!!Me N mY bOyFrIeNd BrOkE uP bUt ItS gUd KuZ I gOt A nEw BoY iM tLkIn 2!!..Im GlAd Ur BoYfrIeNd GoT oUt!!

  • This is very sad and I feel for you! I've missed your poetry! Its always a beauty! This is one of the deepest ones youve written!!


    • DeSiBoO14
      June 28
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      ThAnkZ 4rEaDiN!!iM GlAd U lYk My WorK!! i MiSs Ur ThOuGhTfUl CoMmEnTs!!HoW hAv U BeEn??

  • omg i am so sorry that this has happned...i really am...if you ever need to talk im here....keep your head up

    • DeSiBoO14
      June 26
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      Aw...ThAnKz!!N dA sAmE GoEs 4U!!iF u EvEr nEED aNy1 2TlK 2..iM aLwAyS HErE!!

  • I hope your life has improved since you wrote this one. It sounds like things have been tough for you. I hope that your trials and tribulations make you stronger.

    Mike


  • sonae
    June 24
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    i understand truely do nice write

    "All i want is to get my family straight"

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