I love your eyes, you say they are hazel
I say they are shades of heaven's blue
sprinkled with stardust so
my universe can shine through
I love your face
you have such a heavenly face
I have burned it's memory in my mind
a lovely vision that nothing can ever erase
I love your smile
I could truly sit
and gaze at you
for such along while
I love your laugh, it is a sound
that truly warms my heart
we have talked about anything and everything
and you challenge me, you are so very smart
I love when we chat on-line
so many times we are typing the exact
same thing at the exact same time
it is like we share a mind
I love that you have a naughty mind
a woman who has class and dignity on the outside
and still naughty thoughts
for me is a rare and wonderful find
I love your honesty
and I so trust you
and for me that is
the only way it should be
I love the way you make me feel
whether I just see you or your pic on my phone
or that you are on-line I feel like
I just took a huge happy pill
I love how being with you or just thinking about
you always puts a huge smile upon my face
and I love knowing that you are the one
person for me throughout all time and space
So you asked for me to tell you what I love about you
I love so many things about you Cathy
and this is just a few things
but I hope it will do
Just please understand
that one thing is true
I truly love you
just for being you
A contest entry
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Comments
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I really like how you begin each stanza with what you love about the person then proceede to describe why (until the end of course). In the 6th stanza you used the plural "women" but I think you meant "woman" in the singular. Thanks much for your entery. Best of luck!
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I am doing the finalist top eight and you are in it!!
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Aw! That was a great poem. I loved the little love story in that and it was so sweet. Great job!
My favorite lines were:
I love your eyes, you say they are hazel
I say they are shades of heaven's blue
sprinkled with stardust so
my universe can shine through
Overall score: 9.5
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This is so beautiful. I love how it all flows so well together. Thank-you very much for entering this piece into my contest.
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Thanks so much for entering.
[if you end up in the finals I will comment better]
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aww this is so cute! i absolutly loved the ending! thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck!
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Awww this made me feel like I was floating... thank you for entering and good luck!
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Niiice!
Cathy seems to be a lucky woman. Great poem, stanza after stanza compelled me to read on and learn more about the things you love. nice work
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