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Page Is Blank

My Page is Blank
Void of words to speak
I can't find them
My mind is empty
Absence of color
My river of emotion in words
Gone dry
No rain to quench its thirst.

I really wanna know what you think. Please speak the truth...

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Crystal Tears
    August 22
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    Impressive. Turning writers block into a poem. That's creative. AND you made it a good poem. Neato.


  • Superstarjod22
    June 13
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    been there

    way to turn a block into a good short poem. Impressive


  • Apocalyptic Scarves
    June 13

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    few spelling errors.
    did you mean god dry?
    and it's thirst not thrust

    nice short write tho, i know the feeling all to well.
    and it's horrible, just keep writing you'll find your way out.


    • LadyGothicMelody
      June 13
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      NAME Change lol

      didnt know whom you were lol im n Kentucky right now lol so im hitting this up before bed