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Keep Holding On to a rose, Jasper

I'm seeking a place to call my own.
From the past of wars, to the end of pain.
Here I am to stay the same.

But when I look to the sky, I see her face.
The beauty in those eyes, gives me pleasure inside; of this empty shell.

Inside of this empty gun, with scars in my heart and in my soul.
Here I am forever more with her.

I'll die to see her smile, I will laugh to see her giggle.
I will fight to make her safe, for I'm the one she saved in the first place.

She was the one who lead me away.
To a distance land I might say.
But nothing is more important then to this day; she's the one.

The only answer that I have been looking for.
No matter what we are together, this is how I feel, oh this is how I feel.

Looking to the past, I did not realize.
How dead was I, but now I'm more alive then I ever.
She's made me into a rose, a red shiny rose.

Don't stop here, never stop, take me with you where ever you my go.
For you're my life, you're my spirit, you keep me awake.

You've tame the beast from within.
You gave me strength, you brought me up and healed my wounds.
You have shared me into two, so I will hold onto you.

So, here we are looking at the moon right above our heads.
You're the star and I'm the cloud, that will forever be there.
I'll be with you, I'm here right by your side.

This is how we should end, this how our story really begins.
When the flames of fate become between us.
I'll reach for you; and go with you.

For I'm holding a rose, that made this vine become that same rose; that was inside.
You are the one thing, that I can't let go.
So I'll hold you, kiss you in this passion that is left in my humanity.

I'll fall down the sky and catch you in my pale hands.
This is who I am.....

Alice I'm watching you...I'm with you.

Author notes

This is about Jaspar from Twilight, I dont own him that is Stephenie Meyer, anyways this poem is by his point of view of how he feels for Alice, its a song/poem I do love him alot!

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  • Vampress Alayna silver member
    November 18
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    very pritty!
    but i thought Jasper is with Alice not Rose.

  • kay772
    September 28

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    I am sorry but i can not read this. i am sure it would be a great poem but please choose a differnt color next time. thanks for entering but i cant read it.

  • Very nice

    I love it and if I were running a contest about the cullen's and their relationships, which I am considering doing, Yours would be in the finalist list.
    I like the idea of writing from the perspective you have chosen. Wish I could give you four applause.


    • Cari Cullen
      July 28
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      Thank you so very much when is your contest?

      • lol I said I was thinking about doing one. I just held a summertime contest so I have to save up points for another.


  • MoonlitRoses
    July 26
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    Ahhhh!!!! I love Jazzy!!! I think this is utterly gorgeous. Haha, I sound like some overly obsessed freak...wait...I am. =]

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