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U Make Me Wanna

I catch all of your juices in my mouth
Damn, life tastes so good down south
Your pussy made me drunk then it squirted me back sober
When I’m with you, the pleasure’s never over

Now lay on your back and let me give you this dick
It’s throbbin to bob in your pussy until you’re sick
Your sexy legs are thrown over my shoulders
As I proceed to crush your pussy with my boulders

Feel this big dick and balls pound your pussy walls
I thrust harder and faster as I respond to your calls
You cry out my name while I give you my game
After my fuckin I know you won’t be the same

I massage your feet; suck your toes while I deliver blows
I drill deeper in your pussy until your river flows
You moan with delight then I feel your stream of white
You shiver as your pussy thanks my dick for treating it right

So juicy and creamy, your lust’s hot and steamy
I pull my dick out and drink your cum to relieve me
Now get on all fours, I’m a put this dick in your ass
It’s so thick and juicy I got to hit it hard and fast

I spread your ass cheeks and make you take all of me
I fuck your beautiful ass until you can’t see
You tell me you’ve never felt like this
Now I know that you’ve fallen in love with my dick

I cum in your ass and watch you force it out
You wipe it off your ass with your hand then put it in your mouth
Damn that turns me on something serious
You make me wanna keep fuckin you until your delirious

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  • spiritraven
    June 26

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    Well done

    Lots of hot imagery and even the rhyme seemed a little forced in spots it still came together well... A good write that I enjoyed reading..thanks for sharing


    • moluv10
      June 27
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      thank you for reading my work and leaving such a great comment.

  • haha

    i dont know why but it makes me laugh your rhyme are a bit forced but the imagery is HOT. baby! keep it up!

    • moluv10
      June 27
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      thanks for your wonderful comment. it means alot to me.


  • Ice Queen
    June 21

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    Very hot, and good job. Thanks for entering and good luck in my contest.


    • moluv10
      June 27
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      thanks for hosting this kind of contest. it gave me a chance to go outside my box. thanks again.

  • Wow, Yum!

    I'm melting right here on the spot. Damn hot!

  • sisi357
    June 19
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    as a woman that made me horny as hell!! great writing!

    • moluv10
      June 27
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      thanks for your comments. it means alot to me. thanks again.

  • Very, very well done! Hardcore...I love it. Your rhyming is great and well the story line is quite hot. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck (tell your friends!). Thank you!

    • moluv10
      June 27
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      thank you for hosting this contest. good luck judging.


  • jessica2009
    June 16
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    i loved it. 'hardcore' yep but its beautiful in its openess and celebration of sex


  • Swangrnv gold member
    June 14

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    WHOA!!!

    Giddy up on them there draws cowboy!! l.o.l. wow, this is definately HARDCORE so for that alone i'd say you nailed the requirements! l.o.l. and yeah..hotter than hades..


  • geckogirl silver member
    June 14
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    very hardcore for you... well done... good luck

    • moluv10
      June 14
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      thank you for your continued support my friend. cheers to you.

  • This is definitely hardcore. As I always tell you I love the talent you drip from your pen. But, brother this scared the shit outta me. Hold up, I don't think that came out right. Awww hell that didn't either. The poem, the poem, I like the poem. Good luck in the contest.

    • moluv10
      June 14
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      thanks so much for your comments and support my friend.

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