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Room 101

they all thought it's something scarry
some people said that it is a fairy
only one man knew what the room carry
he was a young man so old named garry

when we asked him once about what's hidden
he only said that what he have it's not forbidden

so we decided once to sneack to the room
hoping that we can reveal the gloom
what we found was surprising it was a broom
a one that brougth to us our doom

still to now we don't know how or why
we were took from our life to this ally

in a place called america we were found
by a group called company demanding confound
they spoke with us with a strange sound
we didn't understood but it seemed profound

it was so hard to explain how all this begun
and that we camed from garry's room one O one



Author notes

Well I have no idea what I was writing about just these words poped to my head and I just put it together I hope you like it even that I'm not sure if I like it myself anyway nice contest thank you a lot

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