we have new reports coming in
there is a serial murderer on the loose
their lastest victim was found earlier this evenin'
the victim was cut into pieces and apparently eaten
he was found in his home around five, just two hours ago
the victim looks to have fought back, he was beaten
to death and then was cut up
there were two witnesses
his wife and son
but they seem too shooken up to even confess
we do have a quick sketch
the killer was wearing a green jumpsuit and a red necklace
if you know anything, please call, so this killer we will catch
Author notes
slaybackc
this is suppose to be a news reporter talking, i'm pleased with how it turned out
A contest entry
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I plan to revise, what do you think?
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Congratulations
Nice take on the prompt. Very creative and well done.
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I really like how this came out. I think you did an amazing job, it kind of reminded me of the batman comentaries
Excellent job, thank you for entering here
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