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Mistress, Dear you called?

Mistress, Is that your voice I hear?
Do you call to me
Is I that you wish to call upon

Mistress, My Luna can you hear my pleas?
Shining in the sky
My love, Is it I

Mistress, Do you hear it?
The ocean breaks against the rock
It also longs for your sweet voice

Mistress, Is that you?
Seductress are you
Dear, You entice my very being

Mistress, I am waiting



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  • now I remember the word pleas
    it can be used instead of beg
    this reminds me the girl is in her doom
    waiting for heaven and orto meet her lover
    it is a great idea for pic

  • pleas should be please
    your use of word mistress makes it dramatic
    I like your phrases


    • Lorien
      June 13
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      No its correct pleas I mean a request not asking permission