Mistress, Is that your voice I hear?
Do you call to me
Is I that you wish to call upon
Mistress, My Luna can you hear my pleas?
Shining in the sky
My love, Is it I
Mistress, Do you hear it?
The ocean breaks against the rock
It also longs for your sweet voice
Mistress, Is that you?
Seductress are you
Dear, You entice my very being
Mistress, I am waiting
Author notes
15) http://media.photobucket.com/image/dark%20fantasy/alien4112004/Dark%20fantasy/gothic-3.jpg?o=536
I hope you like it.
A contest entry
- Dark Fantasy Picture Prompt. by Shadows Mistress.
700 points, ended June 20, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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now I remember the word pleas
it can be used instead of beg
this reminds me the girl is in her doom
waiting for heaven and orto meet her lover
it is a great idea for pic -
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pleas should be please
your use of word mistress makes it dramatic
I like your phrases

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No its correct pleas I mean a request not asking permission
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