He faltered. Hesitant.
Serendipity in smashed fruit splendor?
She lied.
Author notes
If you find symbolism in this, you're nuts. Or are you...
A contest entry
- Quickie 10x10x10 by Starz of Heaven.
450 points, ended June 13, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow!
slapped me nice and hard in my face this one did,
well done!
it was short but filled with alot of meaning!
Thanks for the great reead!
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i wish i got this many comments on all my poems haha.
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This is a great abstract take on the prompt
I love the alliteration in the second line - it sounds great!
Polly
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Great job on this! This was really good, way out of the box and had great emotional content. So much said, in so little words. Great job and good luck in the contest.
Josh
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Well I liked this a great entry into he contest thank you for taking the time to enter my contest have a nice evening
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Oh, now, that is something to sink one's teeth in.
Best of luck -
a story within few words capturing so much
good luck with this, great write indeed
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