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a million wishes, too late

i dreamed i had
a million wishes,
i wished
for my grandpa,
and my dog back.
for my aunt
to admit she was
wrong,
and my mom to forgive
and forget.
i went back in time
and told taylor
"i'm sorry,
i'll come back"
and that she will always be
my best friend.

but then
i
woke up,
there were no
last goodbyes
or hugs.
my aunt is too
stubborn, and
mom
has the memory of
an elephant.
i was a jerk,
i'm surprised taylor ever
forgave me,
i woulden't have.

it's too late now.
a million wishes,
too late.



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sorta/not really under construction...if i get a really good comment on how to change it, it is.

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  • poet317
    June 14

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    This isnt my usual type of poem but i was amazed how much i enjoyed reading it, i love the story that you tell through it and i can really emphasise with this