When desires depart
Know that all.. is blown apart
Death then plays his part.
Author notes
Still venting.
I'm not a poet,know diddley squat bout writing poetry,but Love reading poetry,wear glasses nd do this on a mobile phone,so excuse the mistakes.
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Sweet soul,
You keep saying you are no poet, but sweetheart you are....
Your words are always well penned and full of emotion.
If one can weave into their writes, visuals to be seen by the reader, along with emotions felt by the reader, then my sweet soul, you are a poet, for you do just this.
If your words can hold the interest of the reader as yours do... then it must tell you that you are able to write wonderfully... and you do just that!!!
So my sweet friend, please don't put your talent down for you do have a knack for writting and I enjoy reading your work.
I send you many beautiful blessings of love and happiness your way.
Always your angelic friend
~Angel-anne~ (Anne)
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Thankyou
I always appreciate your kind words,time,encouragement and blessings.
Peace be unto you.
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I love the original use of rhyme in a haiku, this I haven't seen before. It's very dark. I've been there. Beautifully real!
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IMAO
Can't win with you darnd poets and your hickory,haiku,chicory,alternative alerations sonnet sunsets.
Damm.lol
Hugs.
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If it makes you feel better its all good! PS Its good!
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Ta
Thanks very much
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Thanks
Thankyou.
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vent away gal this is good food for the soul
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Lol
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lost in cyber when i tried to put a pic of me up which didnt work either now i have to get a pc with a memory this ones so basic like 3 gig and is as slow as the second comming of christ
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L.O.L
HOW are you dear? I havent bin online for ages,bin sick.
Today`s the first day ive bin out to a yber cafe.Please do me
a favour if you can,say i to all my buds,I miss each and everyone
but dont have the energy to type in lots.Huglz to Mandi and all!
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