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Shards And Ostracons

I should have been an archaeologist,
Something I always wanted to do,I keep myself updated with discoveries old and new.
Found some of my fragments,distorted blemished bruised and cracked.
Puzzles at least have four corners,pieces that guide you through.
An enjoyable challenge when that picture is clear and full.
But dear oh dear,shards and fragments of blurry remains
are not a challenge nor a chore.
Seems quite impossible to put together again.
YOU said.."Fear ye not: I will help thee."
"I'm barely..here,where are YOU?"

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Just venting.

I'm not a poet! Thawt I could learn.lol.too daft. Luv reading poetry thow

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  • parenchma
    September 15

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    You are doing quite well, dear; quite! Must work a bit on your spelling, tho. are you still typing on the phone?
    http://allpoetry.com/poem/5693021
    Might sort of answer the last question...


    • Raspy
      September 23
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      No phone or pc yet.

      Hi,thanks for reading,hoping you are well.
      I`ve been very ill with bronchitis,and offline was
      unable to go to cyber cafe`s,much better now.I know,the spelling
      mistakes are mostly out of frustrations,laziness and an and,but I thank you!Tc.

  • well im an old relic and had a few arty. facts in my time glad your penning again this screams for gods intervention i hear it he does too im sure


    • Raspy
      June 13
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      Hmm..

      Well..It's HIS perogative.
      Thanks for ready,commy and your time.

  • Purrsanthema
    June 13

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    You do all this on a mobile phone? Whenever I try to answer mine I seem to hang it up, lol. I love it!

    • Raspy
      June 13
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      Lol

      Tell u what I do,i have 3phones,bout 12 fone numbers.
      1 for family all over the world and so called friends,when i dont wanna deal with them,its off.
      Then theres 1HOT LINE,LOL,just 2 or 3 hav that one,
      Im an illusive slippery elm.
      Lol.
      Try it,this way you dont need to lie or block numbers.
      Ciao.
      S.

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