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breaking the habit

I throw in another one
and watch the ripples as it floats
hunter takes another picture
of another cigarette floating away

she's mad at me because of these
of something i wasn't even addicted to
that i was wasting my money on
time and time again

throw in another one
and watch it float away
there go your troubles
and there goes your tears

hunter takes another picture
of me tossing them in one by one
breaking the habit
once and for all

i'm done with that shit now
and i'm only addicted to chocolate
because IT can't hurt me
it can only make me better

i'm no longer at 3 times the risk for heart disease
because i'm done with those
only my birth control pills are causing that now

my doctor will be pleased
and kelsey will come back
and i'll finally not have to cry every single time i see her online
she'll actually talk to me
and i'll get to see her again
my druggie friends will ask
was it worth it?
and i'll say yes, because now i have my best friend back, and my health

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DON'T SMOKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • Great message!

    Great delivery of a heartfelt message. Good poem!