UP IN THE MORNING, EARLY TO RISE,
WATCHING YOU MAKING HOMEFRIES.
LAST NIGHT YOU WERE THE BEST.
I ‘M TRULY BLESS.
A contest entry
- Quick One. Breakfast. by Emmyb.
550 points, ended June 13, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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you wanna put blessed instead of bless. and you should probably take off the captial letters. BUT i like your enthusiasm
enjoy your breakfast. x

