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[ He Walks a Lonely Road ]

He Walks a Lonely Road
Where Oblivion trudges beside
and Silence grows in the grass
Pall skies meets endless melancholy
The Tide beats endlessly
Greyness greets greyness
upon seas of pain
Dust rises in the breeze
He can lift his weary head
Love came waltzing by
Her color irresistible
Knowing only gray
How can he force himself
To stay and weep?
Upon the rocky shores
Her presence like stained glass
Opposite Stony Cathedral Walls
Beats on his heart like a voodoo drum







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Ethereal Bard

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  • savemysoul
    November 4
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    this was good, to be honest though i couldn't really tell what emotion you were trying to give me. good write, but i'm not so sure its what i'm looking for. good luck and thanks for entering.

    --- jordan.