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Tired

Im tired of smiling smiles that are fake

im tired of laughing laughs that arent real

im tired of hiding whats inside

masking what i really feel

what did you think? please be as harsh as possible. i want to improve.

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Icy girl
    June 14
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    Can't be harsh. It's short and sweet and, excatly how I feel!


  • Vickie Rosa
    June 13
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    very nice. sounds like something id write