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Deepest Darkest Secrets

You speak to me in terms I could never understand
Bracing myself for the pain bound in silence
Begging to stand
Dreams told through my eyes seem like such a waste
Praying for an answer, to a god to take me from this place
Slumbers laced with cold winters harvest on my chest
Trying so hard deep within myself to take another breath
Clenched fists held close to my heart
Seamless meaningless wonders falling apart

Author notes

I wrote this out of my pure mental state. Don't know where it came from but it did.

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  • naciketa
    June 13
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    wow! i wish i could think like you..... your poem feels so real..it was wonderful