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Thinking of August- Electric

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"Thinking of August", piano composition by Random Goldfish,  mods arranged and produced by wbiro

 

Thinking of August- Electric, arr./produced by wbiro

 



ahhh, what fun...



what? you want a poem? eeeeeeh... alright...

 

 

 

 

in June

hearts drip

warm promises

of August

 

July

heats

two breaths

days closer

 

August

nights

melt

two young lovers

 

together

at last

 

 September

placed on hold

forever

.

 

 

 

 

 

 

in theaters this coming August...

 

 


Part of the "Thinking of August" Series:

Thinking of August- Acoustic Grand Piano

Sweet August Days to Come

Thinking of August- Electric

Thinking of August- Duo (piano and cello)





 

Poems/Scores to the Music of Random Goldfish:
(in reverse chronological order)

Thinking of August- Now or Never http://allpoetry.com/poem/5893739

Thinking of August- Duo (piano and cello) http://allpoetry.com/poem/5660705

Thinking of August- Acoustic Grand Piano http://allpoetry.com/poem/5892115

Thinking of August- Electric http://allpoetry.com/poem/5435359

Sweet August Days to Come http://allpoetry.com/poem/5423787

Sometimes... Faces http://allpoetry.com/poem/4940637

The Moon Tonight- Christmas from Ireland http://allpoetry.com/poem/4895079

Then the Merry Fiddlers Came http://allpoetry.com/poem/4885481

'Round a Grand Carousel http://allpoetry.com/poem/4778751

Two Souls Rooted Deep Within http://allpoetry.com/poem/4776245

A Dream- Where the Water Sleeps http://allpoetry.com/poem/4756347

Lune Sings http://allpoetry.com/poem/4397931

Gas Pump Music Duel http://allpoetry.com/poem/3449548

Chained in Silver http://allpoetry.com/poem/3385242

A New Autumn Day http://allpoetry.com/poem/3308104

Merry Merry Wiccan Wiccan Friends http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/3293000

In this Wilderness a Love of Old http://allpoetry.com/poem/3244044

The Sable http://allpoetry.com/poem/3239364

Donkey Feathers http://allpoetry.com/poem/3238828

The Obsidian Tree http://allpoetry.com/poem/3059430

The Forest Altar http://allpoetry.com/poem/2648314

The Snowy Banks http://allpoetry.com/poem/2646132

 

(some scores modified by me)

 

 

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  • janeofdreams silver member
    July 17

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    A passionate dimensional glimpse

    Summer's freedom and heat expressed through a passionate glimpse, with a warm breeze of love thrown into the mix. No wonder you connect to "Summer Breeze". As sure as the jasmine, you two are a rare and talented combination. I couldn't listen to all of the music in one sitting, but I did enjoy the first three pieces. I remain in awe of both of your dimensional gifts and the graceful manner in which you share them.


    • wbiro gold member
      July 17
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      oh, you poor soul, I should have noted that all those subsequent links were working variations... same thing only different... and thanks for the compliment on the 'rare and talented combination' here... indeed it is rare... and talented... and successful, but it is not without its moments of heated (and spirited) debate... (for she is Irish, after all! ) (and it is her light, Irish lyricism that compliments my deep, brooding abstractions when we are both involved in a score...) and her lyricism does lend itself to poetry, and I do love writing to melody... thanks much for visiting this aspect of my life, Jane...


  • condor gold member
    June 13

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    Oh, this is so delicious. September is put on hold forever. That was just so delightful. A love that knows no tomorrow and just exists for that moment in time. Very well written indeed. I like your humour at the beginning.