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2love as 1, 2live as 1, 2dream as 1


I’d give my soul to see
The sun set on the horizon
I would do the unthinkable
To gaze at you as you smile
I would do anything to swim
In crystal clear water of the untouched seas
To gaze at your magical smile
That makes everything seized
I would do anything to be with you,
At the sea shores gazing at stars
To wet our bodies, to seal away my broken heart's scars
In our fantasy world & dream thus from afar
Our love is so special; it is the stamina of our beings
It’s like the rose that grew from the concrete
It is like a single dew drop lingering in the Sahara
Across the African desert, in the dusty lands
& I would do anything to see cascading waterfalls
I would do anything for us to soar as one
2love as 1, 2live as 1, 2dream as 1
2show the purity of my truest love



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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 13

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    Ah..what the thoughtful immages to bring the depth of the love of your soul into the words of wonderful poetry here..very beautiful work..thanks for sharing...


    • theburninglegend silver member
      June 15
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      Prabhudayal Khattar

      Thnx a bunch for your great encouraging comment; the love of one's life deserves a bit more affections and to be embrace, and from time to time this is the best way to do so, if there is no other way to show that special some1 how much they mean to you. Once again thnx for your comment and God bless. I have enjoyed reading some of your work and looking forward to encounter some more to enjoy. Thanks for sharing as well.