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We're just friends

She notices him across the hall,
smiling as he notices her dress.
She says to herself, "Did he notice?
I done everything to look my best."

In classes it's hard to pay attention,
but its so hard not to stare.
her eyes make his heart leap,
to him, life is just not fair.

They both love each other,
but how could they tell?
being " just friends" is hard.
Their feelings make them wanna yell.

At lunch he says "hey beautiful"
just trying to make her smile,
as he sits next to her blushing.
Starting a conversation that goes on for miles.

Today they flirt just as normal,
as they open there mouth to say,
"I love you", but they feel nervous.
They'll tell each other tomorrow or the next day.

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This is a poem when I really liked a friend.When he read this,he ended up asking me out. It really worked!!

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  • That's cute

    I like it. Its so true too. But I like this poem a lot, its cute. Keep on going. I really like reading your poetry.

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  • Humm..very eager and very curious rendering of the sentiments of the love..and that is really veryt beautifully rendered here...well done...thanks for sharing..

  • this is good! i really liked it! it mad eme smile! im glad things worked out between you two! nice write!

  • good

    sometimes life has a way of throwing unexpected things your way..