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bend

sometimes we'd crack under the sky
        caught between the familiar 
and my heart in my stomach;;
  that was when
i was so bendable 
when every bruise healed as a kiss,
but time keeps pressing into my spine
and sometimes 
  i can't take it anymore.

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  • Treefingers
    June 13
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    Great!!


  • cough drop creek
    June 13

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    perfect.

    I love the last part.
    "but time keeps pressing into my spine
    and sometimes
    i can't take it anymore."