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The dilemma of Love

I know I need to
Let you go
Because you’re
Searching for your
Love
In someone else

She’s beautiful
In ways I can never be
Because you’ve
Fallen hard
But not for me

And I know that I need to
                                                    Let               you                 go

But it’s hard
To give up on all
The dreams I built
In my head with you
Where we are more than
Just good friends

And I know that I need to
                                                    Let               you                 go



Tell me about your love
About the way she
Makes you come alive
With a smile
With a glance
With a whisper

Such healing torture
To hear you
Talk about your plans
And the dreams you’ve
Built in your head
Where you’re more than
Just good friends

And I know that I need to
                                                    Let               you                 go
Because we’ll
Never
Be more than
Just good friends
Who can talk
And laugh
And cry
About all the scars we have
And all the fragile hopes we share
And all the changes that we long for
And that is enough today

Because I have
                                                    Let               you                 go



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  • gah, this is very good. I can completely relate, and it really got me emotional. I like pieces like this that can get me to that type of vulnerable place; it's always good to know that other people go through similar things and have similar feelings...sorry about the ramble, but this really resonated with me. I'm a fan.

  • Daedelus92
    June 13
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    hehe... yup don't know who this one's about ma'am!


    • justencase
      June 14
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      shush, no one knows its you...oops!

      lol, well daedelus92 or should i say mr. XXX XXXXXX

      ha ha ha, own't reveal your identy to the online community but its a good poem dispite being the subject right?


  • fionsee
    June 13
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    this is a very very good poem

  • Ah..the struglle is very natural..and the heart is eager to get things decided.,..but there is no control on the issues..very touching poetry dear friend..well done..

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