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I haven't told you lately
Exactly how much I care
Because every time I try
I feel like you're not there

You used to hold me tight
And whisper in my ear
Make me feel enchanted
Make my life so clear

Your hands has turned to ice
Your love has faded gray
But I still love you
To this very day

People ask me why
They don't understand
No matter how much I try
You will always have my hand

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  • Puppydog gold member
    June 13

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    THIS IS BEAUTIFUL SO FAR!!!!

    I am able to feel your words, the caring, the emotion within them!