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Here's Looking At You, Kid.

&darling,
do you bleed as much as you sweat?
      [it rolls down your neck,
&it plagues your spine,
              sinking into your bloodstream.]

those darting eyes give it all away,
        it's an issue for your tissue,
    [oh, cry me up a fucking river already.]

the gavel is settled on top of her hand,
      curling inside those lines that hide her past,
[a perfect flashback of too many nights in Paris.]

      shoutmysentence,
give me the words hiding in the corners of your brows,
      [running through the botox that the mister gives you for free]

I wish I could scream,
        "I killed the fucker, just kill me.
    I hid all the blood underneath my sink,
His hair is probably still plugging up my drain."

In ultimate slow motion,
that gavel comes swinging down,
  [just like that knife]
&she yells,
                                    ...but not a word.

"Too many times of chasing your tail?"
                              I utter, with a smirk.

"..." She stares as her eyes fall into the back of her skull.

"That just wasn't quick enough. Arsenic next time, I guess."
                              I laughed as everyone swarmed at my next victim.
   

Top o' the morning to ya, baby.
See you in the next life.

Author notes

Hmmm... this is not how I thought that was gonna turn out.
That was funnn

Playlist:
"I Do Not Hook Up" by: Kelly Clarkson.
"One Of Those Nights" by: The Cab.
"Waking Up In Vegas" by: Katy Perry.

Btdubs, I miss my CandyMorphineee

gettin' jiggy wiff it?

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  • Miss Faith
    June 17

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    smokin' baby!

    loved it dearie....spooky.


    "give me the words hiding in the corners of your brows,
    [running through the botox that the mister gives you for free]

    I wish I could scream,
    "I killed the fucker, just kill me.
    I hid all the blood underneath my sink,
    His hair is probably still plugging up my drain."


  • Candy Morphine
    June 15

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    2nd line
    = the bombbb

    gavel
    -gravel? i could be wrong though.

    I hid all the blood underneath my sink,
    -oh fucking lord. amazing x29057 2359435 293

    TheCab=lovelovelovee. kinda like this poem.

    Woo your authors notes has my name in it xD


    ps. i haven't read your poems in far, far too long.


  • living-dust
    June 13

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    the gavel is settled on top of her hand,
    curling inside those lines that hide her past,
    [a perfect flashback of too many nights in Paris.]

    shoutmysentence,
    give me the words hiding in the corners of your brows,
    [running through the botox that the mister gives you for free]


  • swim.x
    June 12

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    "Too many times of chasing your tail?"
    I utter, with a smirk.

    "..." She stares as her eyes fall into the back of her skull.

    "That just wasn't quick enough. Arsenic next time, I guess."
    I laughed as everyone swarmed at my next victim.

    -intensity=awesome. the whole thing was great. it was like when i was reading this i was watching some picture-perfect all-american family slowly splinter and fracture like a trainwreck.

    this was amazing. the imagery was awesome.
    everything was so.. inexplicably real.
    you are my perfect dirty-pretty poet on this site.

    chin up,
    swim.x

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